Thursday, September 17, 2020

My sratch

 

2 comments:

  1. Kia ora Brodie. My name is Kayleigh and I attend Mangapapa School in Gisborne, Tairawhiti. I thought that your post is really cool. I liked how you introduced yourself and asked a question for people to answer. Next time, you should make your character in the middle of the page so we can see it and make the words go slower.
    Kind regards,
    Kayleigh

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    1. thanks for the feedback i will try and fix that

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